SOME CRITIQUE NEEDED

Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:04 pm

Whats up everybody. Im looking for some critique on a song I have for my upcoming album. Please go www.plusishiphop.com and let em rip. Thanks everybody.

Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:10 pm

This shit (Edit: Changing "is" to "could be") spam. I clicked your link which gave up nothing, site under construction. It (the website you linked to) tried to run a bunch of plugins and left me with nothing to critique. I have a bad taste in my mouth.

Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:16 pm

Greener wrote:

This shit is spam. I clicked your link which gave up nothing, site under construction. It (the website you linked to) tried to run a bunch of plugins and left me with nothing to critique. I have a bad taste in my mouth.

WHAT? It never should have done that. The site is under construction but the song should play as soon as the site comes up. I have no idea why it tried to run a bunch of plug ins?

Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:19 pm

"the song should play as soon as the site comes up"

This must be the plugin that tried to run. Still not running it though. Post an mp3 on Soundclick for now, or give direct download access to an mp3.

Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:29 pm

Greener wrote:

"the song should play as soon as the site comes up"

This must be the plugin that tried to run. Still not running it though. Post an mp3 on Soundclick for now, or give direct download access to an mp3.

That weird as hell. I can run it just fine. Now Im starting to wonder if other people are having this issue.

Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:10 am

I think it's just my browser settings.
I'll edit my original post to be less offensive.

Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:23 am

Well I heard most of the my second time there. I was really quite intrigued with the opening. It was good production overall. I think you did a superb job. Your use of samples were quite tasty. I find the verbiage to be rather come in & ordinary, which is a shame as you could say so much more and more expressive way. It's not about how many words they'll have to bleep to put it on the air. It's about its substance presented in an adult matter. You're really there. Give us a better vocal with less common expletives. Please?

Quality work same old lyrics
Ms. Remy Ann David

Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 1:55 am

RemyRAD wrote:

Well I heard most of the my second time there. I was really quite intrigued with the opening. It was good production overall. I think you did a superb job. Your use of samples were quite tasty. I find the verbiage to be rather come in & ordinary, which is a shame as you could say so much more and more expressive way. It's not about how many words they'll have to bleep to put it on the air. It's about its substance presented in an adult matter. You're really there. Give us a better vocal with less common expletives. Please?

Quality work same old lyrics
Ms. Remy Ann David

Thanks for the critique. Keep em coming...

Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:26 am

I like it - especially the drum beat. I do agree with Remy about the cursing, though.

I can't quite make out what the constant clicking is (simulating a gun clocking?). It's very distracting to me because it's happening all the time and doesn't seem on beat. Perhaps use it sparingly or simply automate it a bit?

Did I hear AutoTune at the end? I personally think that effect is overused a bit much. Maybe I'm just out of touch and have no idea what the kids like these days. If anything, use it properly on the line "I'm fully loaded" when it's sung up at the end of one phrase.

I don't listen to this type of music, but overall it's not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 5:50 pm

fourone3 wrote:

I like it - especially the drum beat. I do agree with Remy about the cursing, though.

I can't quite make out what the constant clicking is (simulating a gun clocking?). It's very distracting to me because it's happening all the time and doesn't seem on beat. Perhaps use it sparingly or simply automate it a bit?

Did I hear AutoTune at the end? I personally think that effect is overused a bit much. Maybe I'm just out of touch and have no idea what the kids like these days. If anything, use it properly on the line "I'm fully loaded" when it's sung up at the end of one phrase.

I don't listen to this type of music, but overall it's not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the listen man, I really appreciate it. No that wasn't auto tune. I can't think of the effect I used off the top of my head.

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