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steppingonmars
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Fri Sep 05, 2008 1:10 pm |
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Greener
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Fri Sep 05, 2008 1:26 pm |
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So far 30 seconds in, too much random crap at the start. Like 10 seconds of random calls is enough.
The drum intro thing has a werid feel with the hat stall thingy. at 32 seconds. |
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Greener
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Fri Sep 05, 2008 1:33 pm |
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Fade the song in from 34 seconds, I would.
I'm digging the groove to a point. But someone is out of tune and he's loud.
There is to much volume for the room, The drums are a little choked under all the guitars. Which is covering the voice too.
It doesn't feel as tight as it could be, maybe this is because there is too much mud and no bass.
I like it, but it doesn't feel like a live show, just sounds like one. *shrugs*
Btw, if you could critique my latest live recording I'd appreciate it massively. |
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steppingonmars
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Fri Sep 05, 2008 1:52 pm |
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Thanks greener
remixed with the guitars down this time and less mud in the low end,edited the front and put up the vox, same link different mix
Off to review yours now |
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EricUndead
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Fri Sep 05, 2008 10:25 pm |
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I have to agree with Greener The Drums are distant and I can't hear the bass very well. Turn down the guitars. |
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Greener
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Fri Sep 05, 2008 10:39 pm |
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I prefer the first mix, the drums are more defined and the mud is the only thing in the pocket with the drums.
Very noticeable when you a/b 1:30ish chorus from the first one to the 1:20ish chorus in the second one.
I like the vocals, it's powerful.
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Space
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Sat Sep 06, 2008 9:26 am |
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"dig you up and dance with you at night"
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steppingonmars
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Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:04 pm |
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Ok I took another listen, did some fixes
- cleaned up the bass and kick
- more delay and compression on the guitars
- gated, eq'd and pulled up the vox
http://www.box.net/shared/8bapgak769 |
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Space
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Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:15 pm |
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FIrst thing I heard...the snare strainer...I never stopped hearing it after that
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Greener
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Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:09 pm |
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Okay this one works!
Dude, it's so much cleaner.
The snare strainer is cool, it goes off like a rattle when the energy of the bass comes in.
Also I really dig how you voice is hidden in it. Makes me search the mix and when you search for things you find other things which in this case are nice.
It sound live, loud and rockin'.
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EricUndead
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Mon Sep 08, 2008 9:17 am |
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Much better man, only thing I would bring the main vocal up front just a bit more, maybe just 1 dB might be enough maybe even a smidgen more verb on there as well. The mix is like 100% better though, good work. |
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